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2021-06-20

A time when you gave advice to others

《王者荣耀》《英雄联盟》一度成为国民级手游及端游,风靡网络,至今还有很多小伙伴在学习和工作的间隙也会每天召唤师峡谷走一遭,学生党更是不在话下,你是否也遇到过这样沉迷于峡谷不能自拔的室友呢,这个时候你是选择加入战队还是带他“沉迷学习”呢?

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当我们得到这个主题时,我们必须首先提取一些关键信息:建议,时间和原因。此外,由于它属于事件类型的描述性问题,因此我们可以考虑其他信息:原因,过程,结果,感受等。最后,我们结合记忆以大致构成第2部分的基本内容。


没什么好说的,让我们解决它!



#1


When it was?

To whom you gave the advice?


前两个问题和大部分的雅思Part 2一样,都是属于比较简单的关于基础信息的问题。


在前期的公众号中我们已经知道除了在回答问题之外,还要做到其他方面的扩充,来确保能说够时间。那么我们可以在这一部分加上整个事件的一个起因


Example:


【给谁建议:我的室友小明】

I would like to talk about a time when I gave a piece of advice to my roommate, Xiaoming.


【什么时候:备考专四】

I still remembered it was the second year in my university when everyone in our major was working hard to prepare for the coming TEM 4 which was an very important test for students who majored in English.


【事情起因:沉迷王者无法自拔】

Xiaoming seemed to be way relaxed. I mean he didn’t do any practice after the class and spent most of his time playing a mobile game called Glory of Kings which was extremely popular in China.


#2


What the advice was?

And explain why you gave the advic


这两个问题构成了这个话题的核心描述部分,但是和前两个问题一样,光是回答问题本身可能很难让我们达到要求的描述时间。


因此,我们可以将这两个问题进行融合,并加入一些整个事件的经过与结果,完成整个事件的构架,并很自然的达到时间要求。


【什么建议:打团VS抱团备考】

In this case, I was quite worried about his test so I didn’t hesitate but suggesting he put more attention on his test preparation. He told me that he tried before but he just couldn’t stay focused. Then I invited him to do the group study with the other two roommates. I mean I thought group work might make him more engaged and not always think about playing games.


【结果:成功渡劫】

Luckily, it eventually worked. He managed not to play that game until he took the test. When the test result was released, he was so excited because he not only passed it but got a very high grade.


最后的最后,我们还要对已经产出的内容进行逻辑上的梳理及顺序上适当地调整。


话不多说,上例答!


I would like to talk about a time when I gave a piece of advice to my roommate, Xiaoming. I still remembered it was the second year in my university when everyone in our major was working hard to prepare for the coming TEM 4 which was a very important test for students who majored in English. So, just like anyone else, my roommates and I spared no efforts to do the mock tests several times a day, analyzing our mistakes and trying to memorize as many lexis as we could. However, Xiaoming seemed to be way relaxed. I mean he didn’t do any practice after the class and spent most of his time playing a mobile game called Glory of Kings which was extremely popular in China.


In this case, I was quite worried about his test so I didn’t hesitate but suggesting he put more attention on his test preparation. He told me that he tried before but he just couldn’t stay focused. Then I invited him to do the group study with the other two roommates. I mean I thought group work might make him more engaged and not always think about playing games. Luckily, it eventually worked. He managed not to play that game until he took the test. When the test result was released, he was so excited because he not only passed it but got a very high grade.


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