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看得懂单词却读不懂句子?写作不知如何表达?读完这篇拿高分更容易!
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Hi 同学们~ Welcome back to the IELTS channel.

 

最近收到某些同学的反馈,说在做阅读时每个单词都能看懂,但整个句子串起来就看不懂;在写作时明明有话可说却不懂如何清晰表达……这些问题都是由语法不好而导致的。其实掌握好了语法规则,我们不仅可以听懂,看懂,还可以让我们的口语或书面表达更上一个层次。

 

语法的重要之处最明显的就是在写作的评分标准当中体现出来,因此,今天我们来欣赏一篇7分的写作范文。在本篇范文中,作者准确地运用了大量的复杂句型。这些句型到底好在哪里呢?让我们一起往下看吧~


 #   题目

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (C13T2)

The answer is complex since there are a lot of choices in our life and all of them are different kinds. In some cases, I would say that it is a good thing to have the ability to choose from a wide variety. Take for example gastronomy. Every single person has different meals on their list of favourites. Actually, if you have a bigger family, it is almost impossible to cook something that everyone would like. Therefore, I would say that it is great that you can go to a shopping center and choose from a dozen different food types. I can always find something that looks delicious.


Naturally, there are some people who say that it is against evolution. They claim to say that back in the old days we had a perfect life when technically everybody was farming. I personally disagree with that. I am happy that I could choose a job that fits best to my abilities. I mean no one is the same, why would we wan to do the same? Different kinds of universities give us the opportunity to become who we are meat to be. We have the right to choose.


However, there is one topic where, according to my opinion, we have to many choices. This specific area is television. There are hundreds of channels, therefore you can always find something that is worth watching. Literally, you could sit in your sofa the whole day and watch films. I think that people doing less outdoor activities are the results of the many available channels. From this point of view, I would agree that we have too many choices.


In conclusion, I would say that we can not generally talk about choices since they could be different. In some cases it is good to have many of them while in other areas they could have a negative effect.

从句:

① The answer is complex since there are a lot of choices in our life and all of them are different kinds.  由于我们的现实生活中有着许多种类不同的选择,所以答案很复杂。 

语法类型:Since引导的原因状语从句

解释:作者在文章的开头通过运用since一词引导there are a lot of choices in our life and all of them are different kinds这一原因状语,以此表达出自己的观点。


② if you have a bigger family, it is almost impossible to cook something that everyone would like.  事实上,如果你生活在大家庭里,那么要想做出每个人都喜欢的饭菜几乎是不可能的。   

语法类型:If引导的条件状语从句,that引导的定语从句,it 形式主语

解释:作者在这里运用if引导出you have a bigger family这一条件状语从句,通过假设论证,不仅能更好地支撑前文举出的美食学的例子,而且能更好地衔接上下文之间的内容。其次,作者还运用it作为形式主语来引出观点“要想做出每个人都喜欢的饭菜几乎是不可能的”。It形式主语有一个固定的公式:It is + adj + to do sth。所谓的it形式主语,顾名思义,it只是充当一个形式上的主语,实际的主语是指句子的后半部分(也就是to do sth)。在此例句中,真正的主语是to cook something that everyone would like。为了能更好地理解,我们可以把it is almost impossible to cook something that everyone would like等同于to cook something that everyone would like is almost impossible。除了if引导的条件状语从句以及it的形式主语外,例句还包含了以that引导的定语从句。所谓的定语从句,其实就是一个句子充当一个定语成分,用以修饰名词。在例句中,that引导了everyone would like这一定语从句(译为“每个人都喜欢的”)来修饰前面的名词something。


③  I would say that it is great that you can go to a shopping center and choose from a dozen different food types. 我觉得能到购物中心从许多不同的食物类型里挑选真的不错。 

语法类型:That引导的宾语从句 ,it 形式主语

解释:首先,在这一例句中作者运用that引导出了“it is great that you can go to a shopping center and choose from a dozen different food types”谓语动词say的宾语从句,以此来表达自己的观点。此外,宾语从句里又包含了以it为形式主语的复杂句,这里的形式主语主要表现在“it is great that ......”(新公式:it is + adj + that ...)。


④ there are some people who say that it is against evolution. 也有人说这有悖于进化论。

语法类型:Who引导定语从句 that引导宾语从句

解释:为了表达另一观点,作者先是在段落的首句用了there be句型,然后通过用who引导的定语从句来解释修饰前面所指的people,who say that it is against evolution充当people的定语时,可理解为“认为这有悖于进化论的人”。其实这一例句的复杂之处不在于there be句型或者who引导的定语从句,而在于定语从句中又包含了一个say的宾语从句,而这个宾语从句(it is against evolution)恰恰通过that得以引导出来。


⑤ They claim to say that back in the old days we had a perfect life when technically everybody was farming.  他们声称以前我们每个人都务农的时候,生活很完美。

语法类型:That引导的宾语从句  when引导时间状语从句

解释:在表达观点时,作者依旧是通过运用that引导say的宾语从句,以进一步表达say的具体内容。在宾语从句中,作者还运用了when时间状语,巧妙地把technically everybody was farming这一具体的时间状语从句给引了出来。


⑥ However, there is one topic where, according to my opinion, we have too many choices. 但是,我认为有个方面我们的选择太多了。

语法类型:Where引导状语从句

解释:在这一例句中,作者通过运用where一词引导状语从句we have too many choices来表达自己另一个观点。例句中的where可以换为on which,而which则指代前面的one topic,因此,我们可以理解为However, according to my opinion, we have too many choices on one topic. 虽然这个表达没有语法错误,但在相同意思的情况下,显然是用了以where引导的状语从句更能呈现出我们语法的多样性。


⑦ I think that people doing less outdoor activities are the results of the many available channels. 我觉得人们户外活动做得少了就是电视频道众多的结果。

语法类型:That引导宾语从句 非谓语动词(doing)做后置定语

解释:为了能够支撑“选择太多(如电视频道)也有不好的一面”这一观点时,作者首先通过运用that引出think的宾语从句,然后在宾语从句中举出具体的例子,以使得文章更加的有据可查。此外,在举例子的时候,作者还灵活地运用了-ing非谓语动词,即通过doing less outdoor activities这一非谓语动词词组构成people的后置定语,用以形容或表达“很少做户外运动”的人。


⑧  In some cases it is good to have many of them while in other areas they could have a negative effect.  有时候选择众多是好事,而在其他领域,选择太多会带来负面的影响。

语法类型:While引导比较状语从句

    解释:通篇全文,作者既表达了选择多的好处,同时也揭示了某些领域选择多的坏处。因此,在总结全文时候,作者必须囊括这两个方面。在表达时,作者运用了while一词,通过引导比较状语从句,灵活地把事物的“好和坏”一同呈现了出来。